Antigone Cadmus

Me, too. You may be a freak, but I'm one as well :) Have you read Dostoevsky's Crime and Punishment? Great philosophical book about the affect of guilt on the ...

This is a good start. Much of my critigue is the same as Lord Anzius'. You just started writing in English? That's impressive! This isn't even your native language, yet ...

This is well written, but I wouldn't call it a fan fic. I would call it fan plagiarism. The dialogue is nearly verbatim to the dialogue in "The Sorcerer's Stone". ...

I read Cell. I was looking for a good scare, but what I found instead was a cliche apocalyptic novel. Like all Stephen King books, the book needed to be ...

First, I would like to thank you for not posting, like, fifty pages. This is a good length to review. First, the nit-picks: I sighed and turned up my iPod ...

This is good! I want to read more now :) Just a few grammatical errors: It was a painful process that lasted at least a couple of months to complete, ...

Agh, it's long! I a bit of it. I'll probably do a full critique later, but this little nit-pick really bothered me: In the Chana tribe there was girls and ...

Nice job. I few issues that I'll critique. 1. The story lacks description. The reader has no idea what the characters look like or where they are. In my head, ...

I'm not playwright, but here are my two cents: -It was a little cliche. This themes has been done many times. -I like how the girl left him in the ...

Hello! This is pretty good. Here is some critique... 1. I don't know if you mean it, but you spelt "secret" wrong in the title. You spelled it "seccret" :) ...

It was good. A bit dry. You were obviously shooting for a Jane Austen-style kind of dialogue. ‘Yes, I know. Oh God. Fuck. That’s why I feel so messed up. ...

This is really good! It tells an interesting side of Bellatrix. One thing I noticed: [quote="vixeyt"] “Isn’t she beautiful?” Said the baby’s mother. quote] Said should not be capitalized. You ...

Um, I'm not sure how to review a diary. but... 1. It's not really the teachers fault you didn't finish your work 2. Advice: Abercrombie? You=probably not a punk :) ...

No guns in Naruto!!!! Itachi seems too nice and random here as well, just like the first reviewer said. Also, you make it sound like Itachi was being chased by ...

Nice work! Wishes never come true. This was reality therefore: 1. There were no such things as genies in a bottle. 2. A pumpkin will never become a golden carriage. ...